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40 reviews 200 listens.. wow thats one crazy ass ratio. djnx told me about this. Ive heard the original and i gotta say i never liked the original alot , sounded too mellow, but youve deff transformed it into something better. Up until 1.00 it sounded great , that pause seemed to be alittle too long the pad or whatever its called. seriously 40 sec? lol. The guitar shredding after that flowed nicley ,it was all good. The guitar shredding acutally reminded me of dimrain's music lolz.
This song actually sounded pretty pro, ive heard one of your other songs , and this is a great step up from it.
yeah , good job , have a 10
4.18 / 5.00 (+ 0.021)
5/5
Peace
FUFF
check out my work if u got time =D
Author's Response:
Thanks man=] and that 40 sec break, hmm, theres no pad there, or arpegios, or gated anything liek that=P Thanks for the review man ^_^ and about that ratio, DAMN! WHAT THE HELL!
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that part sounds really kickass, did you use modualtion , and if yes then what lolz. Sounds really good, i like the intro , except it does repeat alittle too much, maybe throw in some varation like piano chords in between the gaps ( nexus is amazing for piano) .
overall man, this sounds great for a trance song , i could see this on top 5 when the finished version is done :)
5/5
4.44 / 5.00 (+ 0.064)
Author's Response:
thanks dude and 3:30 is just basically 3xosc with a load of FX like reeverb and flanger etc etc, yeah its a bit repetitive but its purposely repetitve, but ill fix that up anyways ^_^
thanks for the review!
[3nL]
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i like the piano , it can go along in so many songs , as the the lead , or the chorus , or as both. This is great , its calming. Good job on this .
5/5
10/10
=D
4.38 / 5.00 (+ 0.025)
Author's Response:
thanks for the great review =D
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"[%u0131l%u0131.%u0131lll%u0131%u0131.%u0131l]"
Gotta love that piano intro man , and how it all builds up. Sounds kickass. My fave part was 1.12. I dunno why , i just really liked it.
5/5
5.00 / 5.00 (unchanged)
Peace
FUFF,
Author's Response:
HAHA YEAH!!!!
its a great day on newgrounds, we both submit a song!
thanks d00d
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This is your best work so far man. This sounds good =D.
I couldnt find anything wrong with it.i love the part at 3.14.
Sounds so, awesome lol.
So yea,
5/5
2.98 / 5.00 (+ 0.66)
Keep this up yull be pro soon xD
Peace
fuff
Author's Response:
Well thanks!...
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:)
i still dnt like that panning effect though no offense
5.00 / 5.00 (+ 5.00)
Author's Response:
LOLZ!
i likey it though.
:P
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sounds like Jamaica. good job man =D
Author's Response:
haha, did you check out 2? its even more jamaican....mon....
lol
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I like the sandstorm synth too. its good for making something sound more bouncy and danceable. i like the melody , but the part from 0.21 - 0.30 , the buildup , its sounds so good, like your going to get something powerful and strong enough to make you jump of your seat , when what i really got was just 1 synth, with a long drum buildups. The piano breakdown was very well done , but in my opinion, those buildups where your excepting something big, make it big. Make all the drums , synths and baselines play as one. Layer your melody synths , by putting them together. Such as sandstorm and supa dupa in z3ta. The build ups im talking about here are .26 - .30 , 1.40-1.46 , . I dont really find anything wrong with it, i just feel that it would sound better if the parts after the buildups were powerful and catching. Becuase, in my opinion , the buildup is to catch the attention of the listener, before you give him/her the real thing. The real thing, which is supposed to blow their mind.
Anyways,
good job
9/10
5/5
4.45 / 5.00 (+ 0.0087)
Peace
Fuff
Check the work sometime =D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the advice.
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for me, being a happy hardcore artist for a couple of months now and having some solid work done i could say this is a great attempt at the style, and just a few things are missing. First of all, turn up that lead, and put some modulation on it. The lead has to be louder then what it is at now. The intro is great. the part at 115 when the lead becomes gated was a good idea too. the endings ok, i would put in a piano breakdown before the ending. The kicks are also to weak in the drums. HHC kicks have to be hard and strong. I would recomend searching google for hardcore or hardstyle kicks if you dont have any. and i would put a compresser on the kicks also. One last thing, im not really sure about what speed this is at but most/ mainstream happy hardcore is usually 170 - 200 bpm, give or take 10 bpm.
Besides those 3 lil things though , this is great =D
Peace
FUFF
check out my work if you got time =D
Fuff
4.47 / 5.00 (+ 0.018)
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Yeah sure, complex lol. I agree imperfect disiple , this is nothing from complex. Its just like 2/4 , 3/4 , or 4/4. Complex time would be 29/32 or something like that. Also, theres too much repetition, its just one melody playing over and over again. Its a good song to dance too, and a good song to lisetn to for the first time. But after that it gets annoying. Try making varation, and the transitions from synth to synth with the melody didnt have alot of flow. Try some drum fills , crashes , wind fx, and some more progression. I did like the breakdown though. It did seem alittle, Too jumpy. Put in some chord progressions, wind fx, variation, and add some flow.
Do that, and ill dj this at the next performance i do ;D
Hope i didnt sound like a bitch, just trying to give you good feedback instead of just putting in a 2 word sentence.
You still get my 9, as the song still sounds good even with those minor problems.
5/5
9/10
4.96 / 5.00 (+ 0.0046)
Check out my work if you got some time =D
Peace
FUFF
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback man, I'll try to name any future songs accordingly now that I know what complex means XD
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